In The Name Of God
Hello
. I am Maryam Abbariki
.I want to talk about my family
.I have three sisters and one brother
. My parents live in Karaj . My father is retired.
.My mother is a housewife (before nouns we use a/an/the)
.My father and my mother are fifty years old.They are nice
. My sisters are: Sara and Zahra and Masome
.My brother is Mohamad . He is handsome
.Sara is thirty years old . Masome is twenty seven years old
.Zahra is a teenager . Zahra's behavior is friendly
Sara study (studies) in (at) the university . Zahra is a student . Masome is a teacher . Mohamad is a student . Mohamad is teenager . My husband is a computer engineer . My husband works in the high school . He is twenty nine years old . The end
My Maryam,
A well-written piece this time. You paid attention to capitalization. Thanks so much. Just remember to use a/an/the before nouns. It is very important. thanks a million for the nice picture you added here.
More important: why you write in separate lines . The lines of a paragraph should follow each other darling.( جملات یک پاراگراف باید پشت سرهم بیایند)
Best