Hello

I am Mmaryam Aabbariki. I am towenty (spelling?) years old . I am from kermansha . I live in the Pponak . I am married . I am study in the univercity (spelling?) . My favort favorite color is pink . I like my Eenglish techer (spelling) Thanks dear. I love you tooGOODBYE

Dear Maryam,

Many thanks for your post. I am glad to see you here in weblog. A few points:

First, why did not you post your writing  in comments section(نظرات)? Don't you have the Username and Password dear?

Capitalize the first letter of proper nouns.

Check your words for dictation and  correct spelling.

Hello all dears,
My name is Lleila and my last name is kaviani.
I was bornd (in) at the 1976 year,and I'm 38.
I am from Kerman-bam.
I live in Tehran.
I studied at the Kerman university.
My job is Eelectronic engineering/I am an electronic engineer. 
and I do Instrument and PLC ( Programmable Logic Control) at the Industrial projects and at the technical room.
I go to the ili ILI, after the work. (I go to ILI after work)
I am very very glad on relieve (what do you mean by relieve?) about/with my good teacher and the good classmates.
My tel number is Tel: [phone]
My address is Address: Tehran, zone 5.
I love you all dears and kiss me all of the after(what do you mean?)

My dear Leila,

Many many thanks for your detailed information about yourself. Nice piece But a few points:

--why did you post you writing in comments section(نظرات)? You did not have USERNAME and PASSWORD?  I did it for you this time.

--Why did you write your sentences in separate lines; you should write in a paragraph with sentences follow each other.

--Be careful about capitalizing proper nouns. 

Nice writing. Keep going

,Hi,My name is (M)marzieh.Everyone calls me Mmarry.My last name is Khodapasand , I'm 29 years old

I am the first child.I have a sister and a brother. My Field of study is chemical engineering 

I am the quality control manager in Lliachimi company. Oour company is an car additive

The callection of company products constitute of: types of gear oils, hydraulic oiles, antifreeze,brake fluids, gas treatments and additives and car care products under the brand names as ULTIMA and LIA.  I love my job

My dear Marzieh,

Thanks for your post and long paragraph. A nice paragraph about yourself. You gave good information. I am glad to see that you love your job. Good luck dear. But why so late? Just a few points:

Why you ticked week 3?

Every sentence and every proper noun start with a capital letter.

Do not forget to choose a title for your post?

Dear teacher,

Thank you for your help. I will use your teaching.

My Marzieh,

Not at all dear. Nice job. Keep going dear

Topic for the second week

My girls,

I'd like to announce the topic for week 2. Please write about your family; give information about your family members (their age, name, job and personality and etc). I am sure you will do perfectly.
I am waiting eagerly for your nice posts.

Best
Mozaffari

P.S: After finishing your typing, do not forget to go to تنظیمات این یادداشتand tick week 2 this time to publish your post.

Dear all,

I hope you are well. Many thanks for your participation. I am very glad to read about your introductions. Please read your classmates' posts to learn about writing and English more. Just a few points about writing you all should follow:

• Pay attention to capitalization more. Every sentence should begin with a capital letter.Every proper noun too, like people's names, cities' names and etc.
• Put a space between the words of a sentence.
• Use punctuations carefully like.,:;?!-
• Be more careful about your spellings. You can use the spell check button.Click right on the word you want to see the correct spelling.
• set direction of the text to be displayed from left to right=
   
•  از علامت چپ به راست بالا استفاده کنید برای علامت گذاری درست

Best
Ms. Mozaffari

لطفا بعد از تایپ کردن متن خود و قبل از انتشار به تنظیمات این یادداشت رفته و هفته مورد نظر را تیک بزنید. در غیر این صورت متن در وبلاگ غیرقابل مشاهده میشود.

 In the name of God

Myname (My name) is Melika sadat Heydarzadeh.(Do not forget to put down dot (.) at the end of your sentence)

im (I'm/I am) thirteen years old.

i was born in Tehran 

iborn in azar 

im from tehran in iran 

my English teacher's name is Ms. Mozaffary 

im (I am ) in eight class  (what do you mean? do you mean I am in grade 8) 

my name s school (school name or school's name) is azadeghan sadid

My dear Melika,

Many thanks for your perfect introduction. I loved it.
Do not forget to start your sentence with a capital letter and start proper nouns with a capital letter. For example we say Tehran not tehran.I have corrected some of them for you.

Please write a title for your post.

***Introduce***

(*In the name of (God) god*)

Hello.,My name is Zahra and my last name is Oveisii. I'm 13 years old. My birthday is in July.I'm (a) student. I live in Tehran. In zone five. My address is 1 Amoeeian Street. My mobile phone number is 09306883727 and my e_mail address is [e-mail]. I like (my English) english teacher.

    
 (**Goodbye**)      

My darling Zahra,
Thanks for your nice introduction and detailed information. You used beautiful font colors dear . But pay attention to some points.

my biograghy

My name is Sara Bahoor and (I) i am 22 years old .i was born in tehran  .I have passed the university entrance exam (in) at 2010 and i  will graduate this summerI am (this summer. I am ) interested in my field of  study  and i plan to continue my education

in this field.

I like playing tennis among the sports.I like cooking and baking cookies and i plan to learn it professionally

I like traveling to different cities of (Iran) iran especially northern cities.i plan to visit most of the tourist areas of iran.

Dear Sara,

You wrote a well-formed paragraph. And your grammar of English is perfect I am happy you love cooking, me too

Just pay attention to capitalization. For example we use Iran not iran. we say I not i for من

Love

In the name of GOD

I am sayede Rogih ebrahimzade.My family is four pepole (I have 4 people in my family or there are four people) .I am thirty five years old. I am a teacher two years old (what do you mean two years old? you mean I have been a teacher since the last two years).I was managbent (a manager)  for twenty  years and as a teacher for two years.I am/I'm from Tehran.fatema (Fatima) is my daughter.she is seventeen years old and she is a student.mohammad is my hasband .he is fourty years old .he is a clerk.zeynab is my hasbond's sister.she is a girl and she is a howswaif she is fifty.Ilike my family.Ilike learning new langage.Im

tidy at home

Hello Roqi,

Thanks so much for your long paragraph about yourself. I loved it

--Please set direction of your text from left to right and align text from left to right as this is English writing.

--Check for your dictation and spelling of words by clicking right on the words to check. I have some for you.

--It is better to say, "I have worked as a school manager for twenty years and as a teacher for just two years.

Good luck

introduce mysellf

1. _{...The name of god..(In the name of God)}
2. Hello my friend  sweathart (my sweetheart friends)
3. I (am) Miss Baghery... my first name is fateme (Fatemeh)...
4. I live inTehran,In (in) zone five...
5. I am thinty years old.I read diploma experiments ..(I studied experimental science for diploma)
6. I have a diploma in decorator decorating ,bot not work in jop....(but I do not have a job/I do not work)
7. I usually go to bed late at night...
8. I like to play bicycleing and swiming..(swimming)
9. I am happy with see (meeting) my teacher (ms mozaffari)and my classmates are active..(Thanks dear )
10. Pleased to see you...

Dear Fatemeh,

Nice piece of writing. Just pay attention to grammar and capital letters of the words.

I am wondering why you write in separate lines and why do you put numbers before sentences . If you are writing a paragraph, all of the sentences must follow one another.

Best

Introduce myself

Hello., My name is Layla (Leila) and my last name is Nikbakhsh., I'm 24 years old. Course I was graphic (I studied graphic) . And now the job of design and advertising (and now my job is designing and advertising). I get along well (did you mean this ?) with some friends we are going to study English language center

My dear girl Lili,

Nice piece. I wish you wrote more sentences about yourself. You have a nice filed of study and job. Good luck dear

Introduce myself

Hhi.my name is Zzohreh  .i,m (I'm) 30 years old. i,m (I'm) an (e)Employee  But I Tuesdays and Sundays leaving school classes focus (Do you mean I have English class on Sundays and Tuesdays.) .I i like  Eenglish language.

My dear Zohre,

I am really sorry for being late. I do apologize. I have not seen your post here. Many thanks for your writing. 

Love

Introduce myself

 hello,

 My name is Mmozhgan Nnajafzadeh,i (I) am 31 years old,im study zaban (I study English language) because i like Eenglish language and going to language classroom 2 days in a week .



Mozhgan janam,

I wish you wrote more sentences. Anyway thanks for your post. Keep going.

Introduce myself

helllo (Hello,)

My name is Zzahra Nnajafzadeh,(I) i am 23 years of age,i am working now in lia chimie (???what do you mean??) office, my job is accountancy (I am an accountant).

Darling Zahra,

Many thanks for your post. You could have written more about yourself. Keep going dear

Thanks my dear teacher . 

Not at all my dear Zahra. Keep going
Hug

Introduce yourself

Hello all,

As your first writing, I'd like you to write about yourself in one paragraph until this Friday. I expect all of you to participate.


Thanks in advance
Mozaffari