melika- my family

Iin the name of Ggod 
I i spaak (speak) a bout my family today  i love my family very much  i live with my family i have a sister she is nineteen years old  she is a student  my mother is a housewife  she is fourty (check for spelling please) -one years old my father is job is a driver  he is fourt -nine years old

My dear Melika,

Excuse me for my belated comments. I shall note that it seems you have forgotten to tick the related week inدسته بندی  . That is why your post was not published.

Please do not forget to use a/an/the before singular nouns. It is veryyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy important.
Please remember to capitalize the first word of every sentence you write.

A thank to all participants

Dear participants,

I am really appreciative of your nice posts this week. You all gave an adequate description of your family. I wish you and you family members a great health and happiness. Just a few points I'd like you to follow:

1. First and foremost, please tick the related week in دسته بندی(e.g., week 2 for this week) before you click on انتشار button.
2. Please do not forget to start your sentences (ابتدای جملات) and proper nouns (اسامی خاص) with a capital letter.

3. We use adjectives before nouns in English. E.g we say This is a funny boy and not a boy funny.
4. Before nouns we use one of the three articles (حروف تعریف) a/an/the.
5. Remember that basic punctuation rules will make it easier for you to write clearly. Punctuations such as dot (.); coma (,) and etc.6. Use the apostrophe to show possession. To show possession with a singular noun, add an apostrophe plus the letter s.

Examples: a woman's hat       the boss's wife         Mrs. Chang's house

Best

Ms. Mozaffari

Introduce my family

In the name of God

Hi my classmates and teacher...I am Fatemeh and I want to talk talking to you a about my family.

.My family to be formed of:are my father,my mother and Ali and Mohamad my brothers and me

.My father is a retired (before adjective we do not use a/an) .He is fifty four years old.My mother is named Zahra.She is a housewife.

.She is forty four years old.She is sympathetic and kind and patiently patient (why adverb you should use an ajective) .Similar to all mothers

.Mohamad is my brother.He is thirty two years old.He is married.He has a son and a daughter

.I am second filial family (you mean???).I have not any sister.I introduced myself in the last week

.Ali is my small brother.He is twenty two years old.He is conscript (what do you mean by conscript???). He is handsome and young

.In the end giving thanks to God for my family.they are very good and patiently

.We are lucky and happy with my family

Good lucky

Good luck

Hi Fatemeh,

First excuse me for changing your font color to black, for I wanted my corrections to be readable.

Many thanks for your post.

My family

My dear friends

Hello

I am Leila Kaviani. I will say a word (write or talk) about my family. My husband's name is Mohammad. He is a mechanical engineering. He is a projects manager at the NICI.Co . He goes to the Shahrbabak  in Kerman,two days at the any a week and another days he goes to thehran's Tehran's office the rest of the week. 

We have two children.One (, one) son and one daughter (a son and a daughter). Arya is a teenager. He is thirteen, and Helya is nine. 

I did lose my mother, my father, my sister and my brother at the Bam Earthquake. I am very very sad, of this case. 

I am thanks of every body  for pity with bam's people (I  thank people for their pity with Bam people)

I hope you are well.

Dear Leila,

A nice and well-written paragraph in deed. I am really reallyyyyyyyyyy sorry about your family. And I do not know how to sympathize with you!!!!!!!!!! That is God's HEKMAT and it is again HIS HEKMAT that you are alive and we have you here in our class and our community, you seem to me a nice mother and a strong woman.

Lots of loves and kisses my dearest Leila

My family

In The Name Of God

Hello

  . I am Maryam Abbariki

 .I want to talk about my family

 .I have three sisters and one brother

           . My parents live in Karaj . My father is retired.

.My mother is a housewife (before nouns we use a/an/the)

 .My father and my mother are fifty years old.They are nice

 . My sisters are: Sara and Zahra and Masome

 .My brother is Mohamad . He is handsome

 .Sara is thirty years old . Masome is twenty seven years old

 .Zahra is a teenager . Zahra's behavior is friendly

Sara study (studies) in (at) the university . Zahra is a student . Masome is a teacher . Mohamad is a student . Mohamad is teenager . My husband is a computer engineer . My husband works in the high school . He is twenty nine years old .  The end

My Maryam,

A well-written piece this time. You paid attention to capitalization. Thanks so much. Just remember to use a/an/the before nouns. It is very important. thanks a million for the nice picture you added here.

More important: why you write in separate lines . The lines of a paragraph should follow each other         darling.( جملات یک پاراگراف باید پشت سرهم بیایند)

Best

 

Lili my family

Hello girls, my name is Leila and my family name is Nnikbakhsh . My job is designer,I i am 24 years old , i am from Tehran in Iran. My family are 4 people.My mother is a housewife and she is 47 years old and father is 48 . My brother's name is Nima . He is a funny boy and 20 years old. I and my mother going at to the park for hiking every day at 8 o'clock and we after exercise gaping together (what do you mean dear???) , we have a relation friendly (friendly relation) and also have 2 aunts that are like our sisters . They are the nearest person people  to me that make good days for me.

My dear Lili,
A very good description of your family and to the point in fact. I loved it. Be careful of these points:
I am a designer         or      My job is designing.
Do not forget to capitalize the proper nouns (Nikbakhsh and I)
We use adjective before noun in English. For example we say a friendly relation rather than a relation friendly.

Love 

Marzieh my family

I want to talk proudly about my family. My father died in a car accident, unfortunately. I love my father and (he) remains in my heart. My mother is an angel from God in my life. I thank my mother for all the her sacrifices and I kiss her hands and i hope (I wish her)  to be healthy.The other two angels in my life are my sister and brother. My sister is 26 years old, she is a computer engineer and my brother is 20 years old, he is a student university student of industrial engineering. We fight to live after my father. I know my father is always with us and our pray.


My Dear Marzieh,

I am really really sorry to hear about that. God bless your father; may your lifelong memories of your Father keep you strong and happy. I wish you happiness beside your mother and your siblings. 

Lots of loves and warm wishes
Mozaffari

P.S: I think you forgot to tick week 2 in دسته بندی

(introduce my family (zahra najafzadeh

I have a big family , I have three brothers and two sisters with my mother .

My mother is  a big person in the family , She is a housewife , She is very toilful (what do you mean? what is this word?) and very much kind .

I am happy beacause (because ) I have a good mother and I hope her to stay alive and healthy for always .

My big brother is married but has no child .

My big sister is married too , She has two children which both are boys, Farid and navid ,Farid is the big boy and big grandchild,Navid is the small boy and small grandchild ,I love they them (here we need an objective مفعول in the form of a noun or objective pronoun) very very much.

Dear Zahra,

Many thanks about the nice piece; a good description. I am wondering why you did not describe Mozhgan! I love your nice relationship, you two nice sisters. Wish you both happiness.

Best

Leila my family

Hi, My first name is Lleila and my last name is Hhosseiny. I am 40 years old. I am an employee of the ministry of health, and I work in the health deputy and WHO. 

I can not speak English (Do not fret dear, soon you will speak greatly). I am married. I have two children. I have a son and a daughter. My son's name is Alireza and my daughter's name is Ssara. Alireza is 13 years old and my daughter is 7 years old. My son is studying in (at) school gifted Allameh helli (that's wonderful to hear that). My husband is an employee of IRISL. 

I have three sisters and two brothers. My Father, Mother and My brothers lives in the same street. My sisters are named maria, fatima and fahim. Maria lives in the Mmashhad City. She is a housewife. Fahim lives in the tabriz City. She is a professor at the university of tabriz. fahim is the youngest sister and maria is oldest than the other sisters. maria is shorter and fahim is taller than the others. I love my family. I was born and grew up in the same neighborhood.  I am MSC medical education. GOOD LUCK

My Leila,

First excuse me I changed the font color to black. I did it so that  my corrections would be more readable.  

I really appreciate your writing, a really great and well-formed paragraph. Just do not forget to:

1. capitalize the first letter of the proper nouns like the name of people and cities...

2. Use 's for possession.

Best

MY FAMILY

I',m Zzohreh Zazizi. I,m Tthirty years old and

I got married name My husband's name is Hhossein. I'm calling it him jojo.We got married about 7 years ago old.We are do not have any children.I,m an Employee at Social Security unit it. my husband job is a Power Consultant and a Professor university professor Tehran.his job is very very dDangerous .

their (why their?) favorite color is pink. We like in the sazemanbarname .my family is my father ,my mother, brother and two sisters and husband.

Dear Zohreh,

Many thanks. Please do not forget to capitalize the first word of the sentences and the proper nouns (اسامی خاص).

Best

My Family

My dear girls,

Please write about your family; give information about your family members (their age, name, job and personality and etc).

Best

Ms. Mozaffari