In The Name Of God

Hello .My name is Maryam abbariki. (capital letter)

My best friend name is Sara . She is a pretty girl . She and i(capital) first met at university and we became great friends . She is tall , kind and funy (spelling) . We are classmates .   Sara likes to see funy films and swim. She lives near my mother's house . In the weekend we usually meet at the library. We sit in the library and read books .She is good at Mathematics .So , whenever i find difficulties in my Mathematics homework,i would ask her to help me . We go to park and play together . I hope Sara and I will be in the same class again next year. I like her very much and she is my best friend .The end of

My dear girl,

Sorry for my belated comment. Really well-done dear. This is a cool gift for you

Just I'd like to remind you that please check spellings of the words. It is better to first write in a word doc. after the first draft, go over it and revise and edit your paragraph for grammar, spelling and mechanics of writing (capitalization, punctuation and etc).

Keep going dear

Best

My note on your writings on Best Friend

Dear all,

I would like to acknowledge your efforts and improvements in English writing. I can see how your skill of writing and your command of sentence structure, capitalization and punctuation and choice of words is honing. Congrtas to all of you my girls and nice friends. Keep going and do not stop writing, practicing, thinking and reading as well and also listening. Wish you all success and a great health.

Jut a few points:
1. read my comments on all of the writings
2. do not forget to check for spelling and do not forget capitalization and punctuation.
3. you can start your paragraph with sentences such as this in order to state the subject of the peice:
*I'd like to write/discuss/...
*I am going to write about


Best
Mozaffari

best friend

Hello.I'm Lili, my best friend's name is Mozhgan she is very kind and beautiful she is an athlete, she goes to library everyday. she smokes but her skins is very good.I go for a walk with her every weekend.we have been friends for 7 years.Wwe walked together to the university.she is recently married.I wish her happiness.


My very dear Lili,

I really appreciate your writing. It is really well-written . Your command of English, particularly grammar is perfect here. I am wondering if you gave your piece to somebody to edit it or you yourself have done it!!!
Anyway you are getting better and better in English learning and writing. Just do not forget to capitalize the first word in each sentence.

Lots of loves and kisses
Best

Marzieh-My best friend

Hi dears

    My best friend's name is Leila. Leila and I first met in high school. She is very pretty and well-dressed. Above all, she has a kind and pure heart. She is always been with me in sorrow and joy  (You are quit right dear; there is a saying,"A friend in need is a friend indeed" Leila and I are like sisters , perhaps not exactly like we are really sisters.  I wish     you have a friend like Leila. (Yeah indeed I have, her name is Masoumeh. She is my only best friend.)


Dear Marzieh,


Like your other pieces, this looks brilliant. Your command of English is getting better and better. Keep going dear.
Love
Mozaffari

Best Friend

Hello my all dears . I'm zohreh. My Best my frind (spelling???) have (why have you need to use "is" here) elahe (capital letter???). she has Like myself (you mean??? in appresrance or personalty).she and I are friends since 1382 We became friends at university,We were very happy together, and we ,she and I are always together in say (you mean??) and happy.

Dear Zohre

Many thanks. You still need to be more careful about your spelling and capitalization and use of verbes (is, has, ....). It seems you wrote it very fast, didn't you dear?

Good luck

where are you guys

Hello all girls,

The due time for posting your writing is Friday but I look forward to seeing more of you here.

Dear Maryam, Mozhgan, Roghi, Marzieh, Sara, Zohre and others I wish you would show up soon. 

Best

Mozaffari

My best friend

In the name of God 

Hi my teacher and dear classmates dear (dear comes before a noun).I am Fatemeh.I want to say about my best friend.My best friend is Miss Madahi and she is her first name is Azam.She is thirty-three years old.She is single.Azam is a coach kindergarten .She works in  the kindergarten around AbbasAbad street.She has a stately,simple and heavy character (you cannot use heavy with this menaing you may use the adjective demure for example). She is a compatible and very nice.Azam and I me are friend of season high school (you mean since high school???).We had happy season??? at the high school.We were busy (you mean you were naughty) and we put head to head our teachers sometimes  we teased our tecahers (Dear Fatemeh why do create an expression by translating word by word from Persian to English),But in total (in general)  ;teachers and moderators were happy with us from our.We go (went is the past tense of go) to the cinema and park sometimes.We go to visit the Emamzadeh in more times.We have commuting to together homes.I wish remain stable for friendships.The End';I wish becoming successful and getting lucky for my good friend(Azam)and you my new friends,I wish for

...you success in increasing

Good luck..see you 

My dear girl,

Thanks for your brilliant piece. Please when you are not sure about a word (e.g heavy) or expression (e.g., put head to head) do not use it. Get help from dictionaries dear.

I keep my fingers crossed for you

Best

Best friend

Hello my all dears

. I'm  Helia.

. I have many friends,at school, at the university, at the office and the another (other) places .

My father and my mother were my first and best friends. My sisters, my brothers, my husband  and my children are my gomod  (you mean???) friends. They are my best attendance for hard qualifications and for happy life therms. I am very very glad for such as friends.

My very dear Leila,

Well-done girl. I always love your writings. You mean you do not have a close girl friend to write about???!!! By the way thanks a million

Good Luck

Yours

Mozaffari

 I,m sorry teacher. gomod is fulse and good is right.

My best friend

I am Leila Hoseiniy. I will writing about best friend (you may say I'd like to write abut my best friend). Mmy best friend is Ms Firoozeh. Her last name is Refah. she is from the Tehran. she is living in the Ttarasht street. She is a cardiologist of course,is heart  student. Firozeh is one of my office colleagues.she works at the Mmodares hospital. I am 14 years with her friend (We have been close friends for about 14 years). She is about 6 years older than me. She has a daughter. Her daughter's name is Maedeh. she was 19 people  entrance examination Last year (you mean???) .She is a medical student at the Tehran university. I love Firozeh. Her husband is a general practitioner(GP). Her husband's name is Mehran.   Firozeh is a student at Sshahid Bbeheshti university. All of our friends know that sShe is very gentle and with God godly. Her life is very simple. Her daughter is understanding, smart and with God.

I will call her today.  Good by, see you.

Dear Ms. Leila,

Thanks for the writing and the nice pic. Happy to you for having such a nice friend.

There are just a few points you do not yet observe in your writing:

1. why do you forget to capitalize words and sentences!!!

2. Every sentence should have a verb. (e.g., she from Tehran is incorrect!!!)

3. Do not forget to use a/an before jobs.

4. Please remember to use apostrophe and s ('s) to show possession. (e.g., her daughter's name is...)

Keep going to make your English better and better in near future

Good Luck

Mozaffari

Melika -My best friend

In the name of God

I will speak about my best friend.

Nazy is my best friend's first name.

Zandiyeh is my best friend's last name

She is from Tehran in Iran

She is fourteen years old

She is a student

She is wearing glasses

My Dearest Melika,

Very glad to read your well-written paragraphs here. I loved it however I wished you had added more sentencesSince your pieces are usually well-written. Hope to see more of you here dear. Two problems though:

Why don't you use period (نقطه)after each sentence finished.
Please remember to use apostrophe together with s for possession.

Love
Ms. Mozaffari

(My best friend (zahra

I will say a little about my best friend.

Mmy best friend's name is Ssamira ,She is about 23 years old,She is a good and educated girl.

She is tall and Handsome and Very very pulchritude (this is a noun you need to use an adjective after very).

I and samira are (have been) friends for several years,We became friends each other in the high school and Of same time with too are friends (we have been close friends since then).

My best friend,Samira is very kind and by knowledgable,We are very intimate friends,I am very happy that which samira is my friend .

Dear Zahra,

Thanks for the writing. I loved it. Your command of grammar and English in general is getting better and better. Congrats

But there is only one problem girl: Why do not you capitalize words and sentences!!!

Hugs

Mozaffari

Thanks my dear teacher,I am sorry teacher,I promise that be right my grammar .

Your Best Friend

Hello all girls,

This week you are expected to write about your best friend: his personal information, what is she/he like, where did you get acquainted and etc. I look forward to reading your nice paragraphs here.

Best Regards
Mozaffari