introduce mysellf

1. _{...The name of god..(In the name of God)}
2. Hello my friend  sweathart (my sweetheart friends)
3. I (am) Miss Baghery... my first name is fateme (Fatemeh)...
4. I live inTehran,In (in) zone five...
5. I am thinty years old.I read diploma experiments ..(I studied experimental science for diploma)
6. I have a diploma in decorator decorating ,bot not work in jop....(but I do not have a job/I do not work)
7. I usually go to bed late at night...
8. I like to play bicycleing and swiming..(swimming)
9. I am happy with see (meeting) my teacher (ms mozaffari)and my classmates are active..(Thanks dear )
10. Pleased to see you...

Dear Fatemeh,

Nice piece of writing. Just pay attention to grammar and capital letters of the words.

I am wondering why you write in separate lines and why do you put numbers before sentences . If you are writing a paragraph, all of the sentences must follow one another.

Best