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Dear all nice girls,
Hope you are doing great. I'd like to announce that this was the last week you were required to write in your weblog. Your stories on "Mike and Sun- he" will not be corrected. Just publish a post about the story and have fun with reading your own story and your classmates' stories.
Fingers crossed
Ms. Mozaffari
My general comments on your posts
Dear All,
As you know this week you wrote about your daily activities and routines. It was a nice job indeed. Here you will find my general comments on your posts:
1) when the topic is writing about your daily routines, the name implies that you need to use Simple Present Tense. Here you will find a model paragraph. while reading par attention to the use of verbs, all of them are in present simple form:
2) To tell the time you use this structure: It is 6:30 A.Am/P.M
3) Remember that when you finish your writing, it is yet your first draft. You should revise and edit it for content, grammar, spelling and mechanics (Punctuation, capitalization).
4) Always choose a good title for your writing. The first letter of each word in the title should be capitalized.
5) Start working with a grammar book like Basic Grammar by Betty Azar. It includes many activities for each grammar point.
6) Always check dictionary for spelling of the words and above that for the use of the words. For example, you want to use the verb "arrive" in your sentence. Check this verb to make sure how it is used in the sentence. We do not say "arrive to" but we say "arrive at/in a place"
I wish you the best
Mozaffari
As you know this week you wrote about your daily activities and routines. It was a nice job indeed. Here you will find my general comments on your posts:
1) when the topic is writing about your daily routines, the name implies that you need to use Simple Present Tense. Here you will find a model paragraph. while reading par attention to the use of verbs, all of them are in present simple form:
Getting Ready for the Day
I do many things to get ready for the day. I get up at 6:30 A.M. First, I take a shower. Then I get dressed, fix my hair, and put on my makeup. At 7:15 A.M., I wake up my husband and my children. I help my children get dressed. Then we have breakfast. At 8:00, I walk my daughter to the bus for school. After that, I drive my son to day care. Finally, I go to school for my 9:00 class. That is my busy morning routine. 2) To tell the time you use this structure: It is 6:30 A.Am/P.M
3) Remember that when you finish your writing, it is yet your first draft. You should revise and edit it for content, grammar, spelling and mechanics (Punctuation, capitalization).
4) Always choose a good title for your writing. The first letter of each word in the title should be capitalized.
5) Start working with a grammar book like Basic Grammar by Betty Azar. It includes many activities for each grammar point.
6) Always check dictionary for spelling of the words and above that for the use of the words. For example, you want to use the verb "arrive" in your sentence. Check this verb to make sure how it is used in the sentence. We do not say "arrive to" but we say "arrive at/in a place"
I wish you the best
Mozaffari
In The Name Of God
Hello to all
). I like to have a shower
before I get dressed . I go to university . After I have finished , I go home to
cook lunch . In my house I usually make lunch. I and my husband eat launch together at two am (happy to me). After lunch I go to bed . I Gget up at five pm . I and my husband go for a for talk to park . We go home to
cook dinner . After dinner we chill out on the sofa (a nice expression you used, thanks 
) and watch
television. We go to bathroom at 12 pm (we take a bath. This structure is better. Is n't it?) . I
set the alarm so I wake up in the morning .The last things I do is
locking the door, turning off the lights, and going to bed (or you can say Finally I lockm turn and go) .End of The end))
Hello to all
I'm Maryam Abbariki and will say about my daily activities .
). I like to have a shower
before I get dressed . I go to university . After I have finished , I go home to
cook lunch . In my house I usually make lunch. I and my husband eat launch together at two am (happy to me). After lunch I go to bed . I Gget up at five pm . I and my husband go for a for talk to park . We go home to
cook dinner . After dinner we chill out on the sofa (a nice expression you used, thanks ) and watch
television. We go to bathroom at 12 pm (we take a bath. This structure is better. Is n't it?) . I
set the alarm so I wake up in the morning .The last things I do is
locking the door, turning off the lights, and going to bed (or you can say Finally I lockm turn and go) .End of The end))
Darling,
Really really a great piece. I am sure you revise your piece a lot. I am certain you get help from your respected husband as you said. This is a good job to do, just ask him to explain the rules for you so that you could grasp the reason for the edits.
Congrats my Maryam
These are three prizes for you
along with lots of kisses
Hug
Mozaffari
P.S: Nice pics
