Hello all my dears   

 . I am Helia 

  I will describe about my bedroom. (It is better to say I'd like to describe rather than I will describe)

There are modern pieces of furniture in my bedroom. There are a wooden bed with a white counterpane, a dresser,a mirror, a stool and a bookcase that there are some books in it . There is a purple carpet with pink flowers . The bedroom's walls are pink and purple . One of the walls is covered (a passive sentence is needed here) with the wallpaper . There is a desk at the corner of bedroom , a desk . There are .....on the desk , a lap top , a printer , an escaner and a beautiful doll . 

I love my bedroom

Dear Leila,

I am very glad to see how your English and writing is improving gradually; Your sentences are very well-written. I am proud of you . Well-done girl. Keep going. I keep my fingers crossed for you.

Yours

Mozaffari

Your bedroom Description

Hello all,

The topic for this week is as follows: Describe your bedroom.

Best

Describe My bedroom

Hi ,Dr. Mozaffari dear,Hi Dear Dr. Mozaffari,

My bed room (no space between bedroom)  is next to my daughter's room. In mMy bed room there is a bed, a dresser, a coffee table, a drawer, a mirror and a doll.

Steam press is on the drawer. My room is a closet.

My bed room has a terrace. Brown is dreaming of service (you mean?). My counterpane is purple with cream flowers. My curtain is white with purple flowers. My carpet is cream with purple stripes.

Wall color is pink The wall of the room is pink. My bed room is away from my sons' room. Our family photos are is on the wall. 

Thanks ,see you.

Many thanks dear

But you did not state your name dear.

( my bedroom description( Lili

Iin the name of God.hello,I will say about my bedroom.

  Iin my bedroom there is a red carpet and there are some pictures on the wall

 there is a desk in the corner of my bedroom

my closet is next to the desk

and there is a clock on the desk and some books are under the desk.my bedroom is red

I have two pillows and two stools and a brown quilt

my bedroom has a window facing the street

and 2 of my painting (I)i have installed them two of my paintings on the wall

my room is big but has little a few tools.just this

My dear Lili,

A very well-formed paragraph indeed and to the pint. Many thanks for this. Please be more careful about the capitalization.

In the name of God

I have a medium bed room.

Its walls are purple.

It has a window,

which is covered with purple curtains. 

I have a  book case that I i keep my books in it.

I have a drawer and a dresser,they are brown.

There is a big mirror in front of my bed room, that I i can see my self (no space myself) in it.

my bed room is covered with purple with and white flower and the carpet is purple of course.

    

SOGAND NOBAHARI

My very dear Sogand,

A really nice piece. I loved your detailed description . You have a good command of grammar dear just:

Why don't you capitalize I (من). I should be always capitalized. "i""is incorrect.

Your sentences should be connected coming right after each other to form a paragraph.

Best

My bedroom description

In the name of God

Hi to all my dears... I am Fatemeh. I have not a personal bedroom,But I describe for you one of the rooms in our homes.The room is a side consists of short shelf with long windows.The part above windows ;There are old colored glasses old that are the semicircular.There is a balcony in the front of the room,That this room is connected to the next room.These two rooms they are of inside the way one of door.There is another large shelf large a mirror. The room is white curtains.There are a drawer,a T.V set and a T.V table in the room.There is a flower panel on the room wall.

 This was our rooms or bedrooms ....

      

   .....  Good luck my dears ....

Thanks so much

In The Name Of God

(It is Maryam Abbariki's bedroom)
 

My bedroom wall is cream. In my bedroom there is my writing desk, my computer with a blue printer, my dressing table , bedside cabinet and my brown book case. In front of the writing desk there is a big window with two multicolor curtains. Next to the writing desk there is my bed .There are toys on the my dressing table.There is a Tv TV in the my bedroom . There is my wedding picture on my bedroom wall . My alarm clock is on the my bedside cabinet in my bedroom . My bedroom is beautiful .    The end of

I  Love  My  Bedroom

My darling Maryam,

Very many thanks for the pic and the paragraph. You command of English and grammar in description seem the best dear. 

With lots of loves and kisses

Ms. Mozaffari

Melika-My bedrooms dis cribtion

In the name of God

I will say a bout my room

.my bed is white and black

My  desk is brown

My laptap and computer are is an on  the desk

My carpet is beautitul (spelling?)

My wheel chair is black. (why do you have a wheel chair?)

My bedrooms curtains is are white and pink

My bookcase is brown

My bookcase is full of books.

My wardrobe is full of manteau, scarf, trousers, socks, and bags. (use comma when necessary)

My bedroom has one window

My  blanket is beautiful and sweet.

My Melika

A nice writing. Pay attention to the following points.

1. Use punctuations when necessary like comma or at the end of each sentence use period (.)

2. use is and are more carefully

3. why don't you connect the sentences to form a paragraph. You should not write them in separate lines.

Thanks

P.S: فراموش نکن دسته بندی را تیک بزنی

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Marzieh - my bedroom

.Please, imagine my bedroom

.I have a dresser and a mirror in my room. My dresser is a drawer

.I have a computer in my room. My computer desk is brown

.My bedroom are cream curtains. (My curtains are cream.)

.I think the best way is to bed in my bedroom (you mean???), because I love to sleep

.My bed has a blue cover

.Really, I have a lot of toys in my room

Most of them are from my childhood with me

Many thanks for the nice piece dear Marzieh.