In the name of God
Myname (My name) is Melika sadat Heydarzadeh.(Do not forget to put down dot (.) at the end of your sentence)
im (I'm/I am) thirteen years old.
i was born in Tehran
iborn in azar
im from tehran in iran
my English teacher's name is Ms. Mozaffary
im (I am ) in eight class (what do you mean? do you mean I am in grade 8)
my name s school (school name or school's name) is azadeghan sadid
My dear Melika,