Hello
I am Mmaryam Aabbariki. I am towenty (spelling?) years old . I am from
kermansha . I live in the Pponak . I am married . I am study in the
univercity (spelling?) . My favort favorite color is pink . I like my Eenglish techer (spelling) Thanks dear. I love you tooGOODBYE
Dear Maryam,
Many thanks for your post. I am glad to see you here in weblog. A few points:
First, why did not you post your writing in comments section(نظرات)? Don't you have the Username and Password dear?
Capitalize the first letter of proper nouns.
Check your words for dictation and correct spelling.