Describtion my daily work

Hello

I'm Marzieh, my work is divided into two parts. A portion of the production is done at the factory another portion of the research work is done at the office. I'm in week 3 or 4 days in the factory (I am at the factory 3 or 4 days of the week) located in Eshtehard and I work 2 or 3 days at the office in Tehran. I woke up (wake up; you should use present tense why past) at 6 o'clock to go to the factory, I move at 6:30 o'clock and arrived at 8:40 o'clock. I don't eat breakfast , but always I eat fruit and snacks in during the way. I work in a factory is so much , so I go home  move to a house at 18 o'lock (o'çlock) . After , I reaching at home , I eat eating dinner and watching TV and I sleep at 23 o'clock. I want to explain the second . I wake up at 8 o'clock. I eat breakfast and go to the office. My work starts at 9 o'clock. My friends and I eat lunch at 13 o'clock. I comeback to home at 17 o'clock.

Dearest Marzieh,

Another nice peice. Just I expect you to revise and edit your writing after typing it. I t is better first type it in a word doc. Go over it and look at it with a fresh eye and check for grammar more carefully.

Hug